Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts
Showing posts with label criticism. Show all posts

3/6/16

The Fourth Season of House of Cards (Spoilers Ahead)

As needed, refer to my season three post.

Also, N.B. There are spoilers ahead. If you haven't watched through season four, anything you read below and didn't want to know is your own fault.


Aidan Macallan, hired not only to spy on citizens searches, but also to analyze them, paraphrases to President Frank Underwood something I say often: "When they see (Conway), they see what they want to be. When they see you, they see what they want to become." Of course, this neatly covers a line by Nixon: When they look at him, they see what they want to be. When they look at me, they see what they are. In the fourth season, we see what the Underwoods have become: at its start a bickering, angry couple, but by the end, a couple that realizes, for their mutual benefit, that they must stick together.

I wrote of last season that Underwood is limited by the office of the presidency and, as a result, we are limited as viewers to what he's stuck with. All the intrigue that made the first two seasons binge worthy made season three, where Underwood is President of the United States, feel trapped, locked in. As I wrote then, this was by design. While the outward appearance is that it "sucked," that's ultimately true of the Presidency: we lock someone into it for four or eight years in the hopes that they'll do what we as a group need them to do, what we ourselves are incapable of doing.

In season four, however, Underwood has not changed in any significant ways (even after being shot) but has learned to adapt to the system within which he must exist. Indeed, he and Claire, who had all but broken up at the end of season three, understand now how they must use the system to their benefit, from using a dying woman in Texas to manipulating every aspect of the Democratic Party mechanism in order to make Claire Frank's running mate for the 2016 election.

And indeed, it is impossible to view their 2016 election without the background of our election. Art, as ever, as able to obfuscate, and perhaps parallels are hard to find, but we can see one obvious one: the deceitful Underwood is able to manipulate by seeming to be the most honest, even if in their hearts, the people voting know he isn't. He forms a sort of plausible deniability: we know he's awful, but we didn't know just how awful he was. Could the same not be said of Trump? Of Clinton? 

On the opposite side, though, seems a near protege of Underwood's. The Governor of New York is just as awful, just as willing to do anything in order to get elected. However, whereas Claire Underwood is the Lady MacBeth to Frank's damned anti-hero, Conway's wife is new to this world. She's upset, she says, that Conway would be willing to sell her out. But she learns: she smiles when she realizes she will be First Lady (most likely).

Where season five will go, I have no idea. A deck of cards has fifty-two cards and season five will put us at 53 episodes. The house has not fallen, though it seems poised to. But we know, of course, that Frank will find a way to survive. Frank will never be beaten because he is always ahead. At least we believe it to be so.

Season four is strong. Season four doesn't have the intrigue of seasons one and two, but instead we have quick beats that keep the pace moving along. We are dealing with so many things at once that it hardly seems there is time to consider much at all. Is this not the Presidency in the modern world? As the voices of the two young men who have, in the name of Islam, killed the father of a family, their voices shake. But Frank's does not. Frank is fully in charge, even when things seemed to be failing for him. He's not worried about the dead man: he's worried about Frank Underwood.

Underwood is not someone to root for, I wrote about season three. True: he's despicable. But I'm dying to see how he gets out of it— that's the joy of watching House of Cards. Ultimately, I can't help but wonder if he is marked. He must be. For all his wheeling and dealing, MacBeth could not see his own demise before him until it was too late. Is Underwood doomed to die? Would that not be the proper ending? After all, Urquhart is assassinated at the end of The Final Cut. What will ultimately cut Frank down? I think the answer has been in front of him the whole time.


12/23/15

Hotline Bling

As I wrote in my review of Courtney Barnett for The Rumpus last summer, I’m not really up on the new music, the hip things the kids are listening to these days. They ought, quite honestly, get off my lawn, if I had a lawn, which I don't, as I'm part of a dying middle class that will likely never own a home or land. Anyways, to be fair, I wasn’t up on what was new when I was 16 either (and still became a Radiohead fan somehow) so it’s not like I’m doing anything new here in my early 30s. For the record, Matchbox 20 still seems lame to me, though some artists I used to dislike are better than others. When I was 16, it should be said, I was getting into Dylan and whatever stuff was already old at that point so really I’ve always been behind, always uninterested in what is being produced at the moment. This is not the case for poetry for some reason, where I do gravitate towards "new," probably out of some concern for generally falling behind in an industry where I have never been the hippest guy around and probably won't be as my career moves, dare I say it, "forward."

I was behind, speaking of, on the fairly recent...whatever...about Drake’s Hotline Bling video. I don’t know Drake. I mean, I know of Drake, in that I had heard of him before, but I don’t know his music. I’m not against Drake, you understand, or even against whatever genre of music he’s making (maybe we don't even need to define it beyond saying it's what's happening—or maybe it's not what's happening now and I really have no idea what's going on in contemporary music), I just don’t know anything about it or him. I don't know what he was famous for before I heard Hotline Bling, for example, and until someone tells me, I'll live in ignorance. In fact, when someone does tell me, I'll likely react with a "huh." Regardless, Jenn sent me whatever cut up thing people do wherein it looks like President Obama is singing Drake’s song (well more like Sprechgesang with autotune):


This led me down the inevitable path of watching Drake’s video for Hotline Bling. It’s kind of an interesting video, though I did hear that some people were kind of upset about the video, specifically Drake’s dancing and the usage of lights and spaces.

Falling asleep the other night (where this blog post idea came from and was promised to Jenn), I felt that the song was about the singer feeling boxed in and the video represents that. But it’s more than that: the video represents the modern relationship, something simultaneously attempting to exist without definition but also suffering from a lack of boundaries thanks to modern technology. Space that would have previous defined a less serious relationship is now replaced with the ability to text and call quickly. There is no “space,” per say, while at the same time the lack of a definition has led to the seemingly ubiquitous term “hooking up.”

The singer here is trapped between these two understandings, a paradox of sorts: their relationship is not a real thing because there is no true intimacy but their relationship is real because they are able to contact one another and be in rapid touch regardless of distance or time, things that traditionally did keep relationships defined by certain parameters.

I don’t really know much about dance but I almost feel like Drake is moving around like a marionette, guided by strings to do the things he is supposed to do within the confines of the boxes he must remain inside of. I am still perplexed by the stairs, but I might come back to them at some point.

The song has marginally grown on me though not in the same other things have in 2015. Indeed, I am more bothered by other’s feeling Drake has been in a bad video than I am intrigued by the song itself. I think there’s a lot more going on in the video than immediately catches one. Or maybe I’m just reading into it too much but I hope not.

5/18/15

Person to Person: The Mad Men Series Finale

WARNING: THIS POST CONTAINS SPOILERS. DO. NOT. CONTINUE. IF YOU HAVE NOT FINISHED MAD MEN. IF YOU CONTINUE WITHOUT HAVING WATCHED THE SERIES FINALE, I AM NOT RESPONSIBLE.





The final shot of Mad Men's Don Draper

As I have written before, we expect art to give us meaning, to hand us an answer, even though life rarely ever does this: X never equals Y directly and despite the education system’s attempts to give us a simple formula for art, there is none. We expect meaning, though: we expect to have an answer to why we are here in life, why we do what we do, why things happen, often beyond our control. There are no answers. This is the abyss. If you cannot face a life without meaning, your options are slim.

The series finale of Mad Men is central to this concept, in a lot of ways. I have never written about Mad Men in any critical way, partially because there are so many who do it better (namely Tom & Lorenzo). Tonight though, having finished the series finale (twice, actually), I feel compelled to pull Matthew Weiner’s opus into my own theories on art and being.

The end of Mad Men provides no “answer”: tomorrow, for Don, is another day. He does not die, he does not make any grand proclamations about his identity. Whomever he has chosen to continue as (Don or Dick Whitman) is entirely in his own mind and we, the viewer, are done. Our window into the world of this character is over. For the characters of the series, they are moving on. Whatever their resolutions are at the end of the series are for us. Their ultimate fates are unknown and that is exactly as it should be.

There is some backlash already. Did Don create the famous Coca-Cola ad? I am uncertain but I think it is fairly obvious we are to draw that conclusion based on his smile, which some are reading as smug but I read as peaceful, knowing. He has reached the center and, at the center. Don Draper comes up with advertisements. He is a pitchman and, now that the “catastrophe of [his] personality” has become "beautiful again"(quoting his own reading of Frank O'Hara's "Mayakovsky" earlier in the series) and he has found peace, his mind is free to create from within itself using the form it has worked in: ads. A writer, the more writing they do, relates to the world through their words, through their development and manipulation of language. Ultimately, it becomes their form of communication, the way in which they process the world that they live in. For Don, his clarity brings him back to his love. Reddit user Northern_kid writes “He finds nirvana and sells it.” Indeed.

I do not want an answer. I do not want to know what happened to Don once he stopped chanting. I do not care. Don is alright, he is alive, as far as we know, and that is it. He has, in his moment, created something new, I suspect, and he will go and give it to the world. Every character, to some extent, has reached a level of closure, a moment that genuinely makes them smile. For Joan, it is having no boss. For Pete, having his family with him and a fresh start. For Don, well, for Don we have a feeling it is a deep understanding of himself. However, we do not know that in any meaningful way and I understand how that is bothersome to people.

Why, though? Is it because viewers of the series eventually expected closure on every level— that we should know the ultimate fate of each character which has passed through the series? Weiner’s great triumph, in my opinion, is his selectivity, his ability to show us the portions of these lives as we need to see them and understand them. Yes, the series exists for us to watch but these characters do not exist on our plane: they exist for their world and that world has its own beginning and ending without us. Their lives continued on for whatever time period. Our concern is over. The 60s have ended and the characters have made their peace with that, even if we as a nation had not by the end of 1970. It would take much of the 1970s and beyond to really make sense of what the nation had gone through during the 60s. Maybe, to an extent, we still do not understand it and mostly will never have that opportunity.

Weiner, though, delivered the final episode perfectly. There have been a lot of turns to throw us off but ultimately, the series is about a man’s journey to find inner peace, to understand his actions in a war that he always had difficulty justifying. Dick Whitman’s stealing of an identity in order to get home, we find out, is hardly the worst thing anyone has done in the armed forces to get out alive. Dick did what he could to get home and ultimately, there is some forgiveness there for Draper. He may not have returned to the name but Dick Whitman finally returned from Korea in the last episodes of the series.

In our most basic art forms, we demand answers. The more complex forms are made fun of because “anything” can be that art form. That is not true, of course: it takes an inner understanding beyond a superficial one to understand contemporary art in many cases. I feel that anyone who has watched the series and thoroughly thought it through is not surprised or bothered by this ending. Don’s smile at the end, though read by some as “smug” seems to me to be the moment he has reached his true inner self. He understands himself and his role in this world. It is in that moment that his mind frees itself to create and create it does.



I had a moment when I finished watching this episode that I would like to share: I have rewatched the series several times, up to whatever episodes were available at that time. Surely the first several seasons three to four viewings, the last two seasons maybe a viewing or two each. The finale, I have watched twice now, back to back. In a way, I have had the experience. I think I have experienced the moments that Weiner wanted me to experience and my time with the Mad Men universe is at an end. This is not to say I will not return to the series later, just that I am okay, alright, with where the series has ended and where I have changed in having experienced it. I think good art should not move you substantially, only give you a little flavor of someone else’s experience to add to your own. Nothing can change your life but art can provide you some moments in which you understand your part in the world, even if there is no set definition of such a thing. 

Addendum: I feel like there's an aspect here I would love to write more on, which is Don's version of capitalism and Coca-Cola's which comes out of the ad. It is leaning on the good vibes of the era which quickly falls away.

A few personal notes:

1) I have really enjoyed the series. I think the actors have nailed these parts (I expect lots from Kiernan Shipka, certainly) and Matthew Weiner has written the first line of his obituary. There is nothing worse, as a writer, that I can imagine than writing the one work for which you will be remembered at a relatively young age but, I think sadly, Mr. Weiner has done it. Mad Men is the great American novel in television's often rough format. Truly, this series has made television itself the true art form for telling a real narrative over time. Movies are no longer capable of doing such. Just let Michael Bay entertain you, I guess.

2) As an Atlanta kid, the Coca-Cola song is home to me. It makes me misty-eyed and, in Don's words from near the start of the series, I feel nostalgic. That we as a society could never have lived up to its ideals saddens me, to an extent, but I suppose it would be silly to develop ideals from an ad. 



3/3/15

The Third Season of House of Cards (SPOILERS AHEAD)

N.B. Please, seriously, do not blame me if you continue. There are spoilers here that literally will ruin the last seconds of the season. You have been warned.




“Sometimes, I think the Presidency is the illusion of choice.”

Season three of Netflix’s wonderful House of Cards suffers from exactly what Frank Underwood suffers from: one can no longer be enveloped in intrigue when one is the President of the United States. What made Underwood such an engaging character, in fact, was all the wheeling and dealing he was able to engage in behind the scenes, whether that be politics or manipulating the lives of those around him. And that was possible for Representative Underwood and even Vice President Underwood, but for President Underwood, the stakes are much too high, the exposure too vast.

What Underwood did brilliantly, even when illegal and immoral, was work in the cover of darkness. He could walk out of a subway station after having pushed his lover in front of a train or out of a garage after having left a car running with another representative sitting in a car. Underwood, like a clandestine agent, was able to walk in and out of situations that made the show interesting, even if it removed the realism from the series.

However, for President Underwood, the privacy in which he thrived is gone, like it is for all Presidents in the age of modern media and technology. The President does not have the ability to sneak away under the cover of darkness in the same way that, at the very least, Underwood’s version of a Congressperson is able. President Underwood is the “Hotel California” president: he can check out, but he cannot leave.

Further, the President suffers from another limitation, at least in the eyes of Underwood: the two-term limit, which has served us as a nation incredibly well, is a major issue for President Underwood. Whereas primary challenges and elections were forgone conclusions for the Representative, the term limitation means Underwood has only a set number of years to get anything done. If I recall correctly, a Vice President who ascends to the Oval Office may finish out the term of the President they served under (so President Walker’s term in Underwood’s case) and then run for two subsequent terms as President, though I believe everyone is limited to ten years. While this has not happened in our history yet, it seems plausible within the world of House of Cards.

Consider, however, the alternative: Representative Underwood could remain in the House in whatever capacity for a lifetime, functioning more or less how he chooses. As President, he is severely limited and, regardless of Mrs. Underwood’s eyes for office or glory herself, Frank himself is very likely in the last job he will ever have. It is, however, at the point of achieving, seemingly, everything he had wished for and more since the opening episode of the series that he seems to lose his grasp on the things around him which made him so powerful to begin with. While he cannot escape the job of the President while still holding office, it is Claire who has the escape, the way out: when realizing that the glory was for Frank and not for the both of them, she has no trouble leaving. She has no trouble stepping away from him when the rules of the game have changed in front of her.

Obviously, on one point, there can be no argument, which is that Frank Underwood is by no means a character to look up to, which in a way makes his impending downfall all the more welcomed and satisfying. Claire had to leave, regardless of the fact that she herself was not entirely innocent of the crimes Frank committed in order to reach the station in life they both desire.

In three seasons, I have never quite figured out what that station is. Initially, I felt it was the slight of Frank being passed over for office. But that does not seem to be it: there is something deeper which drives the Underwoods and some glory which is always just out of reach. As the writer Tom Yates, who is hired by Frank to write a book on AmWorks, says, legacy is their child, the thing which they will pass down. But I have to wonder: at some point, ex-Presidents, even if they eventually become First Husbands, end up playing golf or saving the world by other means.. No one can do the job forever, which is the benefit I mentioned earlier of the 25th Amendment. So what, then, drives the Underwoods?

Of course, we may not find out, but I believe this to be a central question of the series at the end of season three, especially as Claire has come to understand that that goal is at an end, that whatever glory they might hope to achieve together has truly slipped away. Ultimately, however, it seems that Frank has his own agenda, his own dreams, and whether or not he believed that his actions were both of them, clearly something has gone awry.

Regardless, there are no easy fixes, either for America in during the Underwood administration or for the relationship central to the series. Even Stamper, who has had his own journey throughout the season and, in fact, throughout the series, has come to a point where he has destroyed the very thing he loved in order to serve the President. What happens when he realizes that his loyalty is too high a price, as Claire did? Assuming a fourth season is in the works, obviously some of these questions will be answered. However, with good television at this point in its history, not all answers are forthcoming, simple, or even answerable. Television needs not provide us the answers we seek simply because it is a conventionally simple medium.

(I say "television," though this is clearly not broadcast television. However, only the artifice of delivery has changed: it is still a serial program, even if you binge watch it.)

There is a malaise, it seems, that has set in in the series, but only because there is a malaise in the White House, in the Underwood administration. This is not something that is happening due to bad writing but fine writing, writing which brings us into that malaise. It is, in many ways, the malaise of the office which Underwood holds: the inability to make real change in a job considered to be all-powerful weighs on this President and, ultimately, on the series itself.

That said, I do not see this as a problem: I see it as a sort of triumph. No, it is not the most enjoyable season of the three but it is, in many ways, the most intriguing, the most developed as a whole. It draws us so deeply into the Underwoods's world in the most subtle of ways that it is hard not to end the season, which itself ends on a series of devastating notes, with some hope for the future of the series, with some hope that the downfall of the Underwoods can provide some satisfaction that some level of good can eventually triumph.

1/15/15

A few thoughts on Frank (2014)


"What truth can you as an actor tell with a mask that you can't tell with your face?"
                                                                       -Stephen Colbert, The Colbert Report

I was rather leery of seeing Frank. I watched Colbert's interview with Michael Fassbender (whose mask above is shattered and to whom the above question is posed) and heard the make-shift band of the film perform "I Love You All," which I did not initially care for. However, seeing the lifeless eyes of the Frank mask on Netflix as I logged in drew me towards the film. What was it about acting behind this mask that worked for Fassbender, who claimed to have loved acting behind it? What was it about that song that kept me thinking about the interview and the tune itself that I had to see it?

At its heart, Frank is a film about mental illness and the mask that we as a society ask those with among us mental illness to wear. Frank the character is able to cope, to survive, because he's made every sacrifice to live beneath the mask. He's stopped eating solid foods and, based on the frequent description of his facially moves beneath it, he has ceded much of who is to the mask because, without it, the world is simply too much for him to deal with as a result of his illness. Jon, played by Domhnall Gleason, knows about Frank's mental illness in an objective but when finally frustrated with its emergence while at South by Southwest, Jon attacks Frank for wearing it, causing him to run into the street, be hit by a car, and then run off with his mask left behind.

The mask and the other members of the band Soronprfbs are a necessary wall of ambivalence around Frank, gathered not so they could protect him but so they he could utilize their lack of ambition as a safe-guard against exposing his mental illness. It is not Jon's attempt to remove the mask that leads to Frank's breakdown: it is Jon's addition to the band at all. One has to wonder if Frank had some idea of what he was doing.

The film also asks what the source of creativity is. With the mask on, Frank finds inspiration in all things and is able to channel that inspiration into music. Without the mask, in his parents' home, Frank stands by the radio, still finding the inspiration, but upon sitting at the piano, nothing comes. As the mask of mental illness has cracked, Frank feels he is unable to create, regardless of what moves him.

There is some redemption for Jon and some good hope for Frank in the end, however: by rejoining his band mates playing for no one at all, he is able to see that he can still create, still use the world around him to inspire him to write lyrics and sing. Jon leaves them well enough alone, walking away without a word at the end, understanding finally that Frank is best when surround by the creativity he seeks but safer when away from the stardom he feels Frank deserves. Frank is content to play forever in this place, as are his colleagues.

So, the original question, which was posed by Colbert as based off an Oscar Wilde quote, "Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth," asked Fassbender to consider what he as an actor felt the mask provided him. Fassbender jokes about it, saying it got him away from working, but I think the answer would have been too nuanced for the few minutes Colbert's show provides.

Acting when your facial expressions are not visible must be quite difficult, no doubt, but perhaps the truth to be known here is more about Frank's change from avant-garde genius to anguished recluse. I am curious how Fassbender portrayed this. His acting is no doubt amazing in the film and is certainly one reason to see it.

I am very curious about Colbert's question. I wish I were capable of answering but never having acted in my life, I am out of my element here.

10/22/14

Permutational Aesthetics and The Kinks' "Come Dancing"


Previous posts on permutational aesthetics:
Permutational Aesthetics and David Lynch's Mulholland Drive

In the first post on permutational aesthetics, a sort of definition was given:
Fiction that derives from the biographical has the amazing opportunity to correct the moments in our lives that we might regret, or that didn't go the way we were planning. Writing allows for a kind of consummation that life does not.
This correction, of course, is the permutation, the redesign of a moment or series of moments into a new moment in a work of art. Art, of course, is a socially acceptable space in which to create a permutation, lest anyone end up like Scottie Ferguson in Vertigo, manipulating Judy into changing everything about herself in order to re-create what is, unknown to him at the time, a sort of  play for his benefit that was designed to cover up a murder. Of course, Scottie's re-creation goes horribly wrong, with Judy, finally made into Madeleine, falling to her death.

Naturally, permutation and trauma are interconnected: it is often a trauma which leads to the recreation of a situation in art that cannot be made to occur in real life. And while previous posts have focused on poets, fiction writers and filmmakers, there has been an exclusion which is obvious: the world of music. Music, with its necessary abstraction of sound, is not always a place for permutational work, in that it is primarily the lyrics which function as a re-creation and not the music itself.


Released in the fall of 1982 in the U.K. (spring of 1983 in the U.S.), The Kinks' "Come Dancing" is a charming song about nostalgia for a bygone era in which the "big bands used to come and play" at a local Palais, or dance hall. The nostalgia in the song, of course, is not only for the era, but for the singer's sister, who would frequent the Palais with a date who would "end up blowing all his wages for the week/all for a cuddle and a peck on the cheek." The nostalgia here leans towards a young man's sexual awakening, the realization that the men who dated his sister were interested in sex and that his sister was seemingly only interested in going out and having a good time while having her expenses paid for the evening. The singer realizes, as an adult perhaps, that it was these moments that he remembers when thinking of his sister, of understanding the dynamics involved in the relationship between her, the date and the Palais. The sexual element plays out in the singer's voyeurism, a curiosity about very simple sexual practices which, to the singer, seem foreign and from which he must hide himself despite his desire to continue watching.

For Ray Davies, the lead singer and, in this case, the songwriter of "Come Dancing," the nostalgia here stems from a trauma which leads to the song being not only a tribute but ultimately an act of permutational re-creation. Thomas Kitts, in his 2008 critical biography of Davies, writes that Davies' older sister, Rene, suffered a fatal heart attack at the Lyceum ballroom on the songwriter's 13th birthday, for which she had purchased a Spanish guitar as a present. These two events, for Davies, must be inextricably linked: music, of course, became his way of entering the world but only through the tragedy of his sister's untimely death at the age of 31.1

The sister of Davies' song, however, lives a happier life: she has not only grown older but has daughters of her own for whom she, in continuation of an earlier theme about their mother, must now wait up until they return home at all hours of the night. This is, of course, the very nature of permutation: giving life to one who has not had the opportunity to enjoy it and giving to them, through art, a sort of gift. In Davies' case, it is hard to deny that this is a sort of ideal he imagines not only for her but for himself, a sister who, for the simple asking, would be willing to go dancing with him, which of course further plays upon the sexual fantasies of the singer and his voyeuristic viewing of his sister with your would-be lover "by the garden gate." Perhaps in Davies' case, dancing could be seen as a stand-in for his musical career, which his sister allowed him to begin, but which she never saw.

For the singer in the song, his childhood dies "the day they knocked down the Palais," though in considering the formative age at which he not only received the instrument he has spent his life with but also the trauma he has suffered with his sister's sudden death, it seems very likely this moment for Davies not only marked the end of his childhood but also the metaphorical death of the Palais and the era of big band music. Of course, for the singer, and for Davies, the death of the Palais and the death of his sister, respectively, has given direction to his life as he has "grown up and [is] playing in a band." The town, too, has moved on and leaves the listener with similar feelings for locations long gone. For Davies, however, the pain is deeper and the song allows him the space to process these emotions, however complex, into a new moment.



1 Kitts, Thomas M. Not Like Everybody Else. Routledge, 2008.

6/2/14

Tragipoetics IV

On Seth Abramson's "Last Words for Elliot Rodger," or Timeliness

from KTLA

Tragipoetics I
Tragipoetics II
Tragipoetics III

NB: I realize in writing this post I am wading into a proper quagmire. There are lots of issues here which I feel very strongly about and I understand that I am also addressing an audience for whom these issues are also the source of heavy emotional response. I myself had a strong emotional response to Rodger’s mass murder as well as the reasons for it, which I admit will be hard to escape while discussing his words and his actions.

I also accept that I am not fully capable of expressing all sides of this issue, which is also not my goal. My goal in this post is to look at Abramson’s poetic examination into Rodger’s language and how we as poets (and people) process trauma and tragedy through poetry.

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Rarely do we get such a comprehensive view into the words of a killer. We are often left wondering what the motivation for a heinous crime could have been. Equally often, it seems, we are left covering the entire incident as purely a mental health issue and moving forward without investigating further. In the case of Elliot Rodger, we have various forms of media, specifically videos and text, from which to extrapolate and discuss his actions in Santa Barbara. What is simple here is the basic motivation: Rodger blamed women as a whole for his problems. Whatever mental health issues he had were exacerbated, it seems, by the company he kept, by how he viewed himself and his life. And he targeted women due to his own sense of entitlement towards sex and other intimacy.

Ultimately, Rodger’s actions have led to a discussion which we should have been having all along about gender and entitlement in our culture. Patriarchy hurts everyone and it seems that while Rodger’s anger, mental illness and other issues directly led to these events, the systemic views held up by much of society provided him the artifice by which to act. It is not one group or one person at fault here: it is the whole of society who must evaluate and respond to the cultural causes of this horrendous crime. Rodger found other people online who either introduced him to or reaffirmed his pre-existing ideas about how women somehow owed men their sexuality and bodies. While Rodger’s mental health issues caused the hyperbolic violence that took place, the various groups with which he associated provided the language and tone Rodger used in his various messages. That Rodger had mental health issues cannot – and should not – be denied. But nor should the cultural context in which his thoughts and actions appeared.

As people were just beginning to process this tragedy, Seth Abramson’s poem, published by Huffington Post, emerged to “remix” the words of Rodger into a poem to explore the nature of this tragedy via its linguistic attributes. Abramson, it seems, sees this work as a sort of “first responder” poem, the initial salvo into the discussion of Rodger’s language and motivations. However, the uproar caused by Abramson’s work has led to, at best, a murky response in which the simple posting of the poem is being examined versus the goal of the poem. At worst, Abramson has been referred to as opportunistic, taking advantage of the tragedy in Santa Barbara as a way of furthering his own career/web presence while displaying his own privilege via the poem and its location of publication.

Abramson’s poem raises a critical question: Is poetry really about “first response” capability? I do not believe it is, as I have written over the course of these trauma poetics posts. What process has Mr. Abramson gone through to understand Rodger’s motivations and emotions via his language within the few days between Rodger’s actions and Abramson’s publication of the poem? While the rest of the poetry community, along with the general public, is attempting to discuss the cultural issues which led to Rodger’s crime, Abramson is already posting a poem which attempts to use the killer’s language against itself.

The issue I hope I have been delving into in these posts is the role of poetry (and its exploration of language) in the processing of tragedy and trauma. I do not believe poetry is the first response but rather the last, the culmination of thought and experience at the point where it has settled into the mind. We must first take stock in tragedy, to try and understand the depth and reach of that tragedy and I question the idea of poets as first responders. We must begin to process tragedies and our emotional response to them before engaging in poetics to respond to them.

Poetry is, in part, a process of thinking through, a way of seeing all things around and boiling them into the main artifice of communication and expression. Language is not the oldest form of expression but is one which allows us to articulate our most complex thoughts, which is to say that when an event with complex grounding occurs.

As Abramson asks in his introduction “Can hateful words be turned against themselves and become, instead, a vehicle for amity and compassion?” I think for Abramson, this was an attempt at thinking through, of processing, but I believe there were several issues with his efforts:

1) His work came too soon, before we as a poetry community or we as a society could really even discuss the range of interrelated issues involved in Rodger’s thoughts, commentary and actions. For many, the tragedy in Santa Barbara brought the issues of sexism and misogyny into the public view for those who were generally ignorant of it. For Abramson’s poem to be published in such a public manner so quickly after the tragedy had occurred contributed to the reaction the work and its author received.

2) His poem does not truly attempt explore the issues at the heart of the mass murder and cultural significance surrounding it, perhaps as a result of his zeal to get the poem published quickly. The poem attempts to appropriate Rodger’s language but feels in reading as though there is no in-depth exploration of the cultural themes surrounding the events. As a result, the poem feels not only exploitive of tragedy but also seems, at points, to sympathize with Rodger’s views. I believe that Abramson’s rush to publish the poem in the midst of the tragedy led to a lack of seeming awareness of all these issues in the poem, leading to a negative response from many in the poetry community.

3) He did so while being Seth Abramson. Many in the poetry community seem to have negative feelings about him. This is not to say that the poem would have been praised had it been published by someone else but I believe that Abramson’s role in the poetry community did affect the response to his work. Also, it seems that not only the timing of the post as well as the venue in which it was published led to this response. A poem, normal publication of which would have been ignored by the public at large, was suddenly on Huffington Post and seemingly representative of a community which is also generally ignored. Was this the poem we wanted front and center in the wake of such an event? Even if Abramson’s goal was only to present his work, this was now the most visible poem in response to Rodger’s manifesto and “Elliot, you slay me/And I love you,” regardless of its attempt at empathizing with someone who was brought to this point by his mental health issues and the hatred of those with whom he found a sense of community, is not the sentiment anyone wants to see in a public space regardless of context.

I do believe Abramson was correct on this: poetry should be free to attempt dismantling ideas and events. I doubt there are many who would disagree with him on this front but the question remains as to whether or not his poem truly manages this. While I take Abramson at his word that he was not attempting to offend (though he says a poem has the right to offend, with which I agree), it seems the poem was not fully engaging with the situation. Abramson’s desire to be the voice of poetry in the public sphere seems to have collided with the need to be among the first to respond.

Abramson may say that my questioning of his timeliness is an attempt to rein poetry in and he is probably not wrong. However, I do believe that, in context of tragedy, poetry has an important role to play in processing and recovery.

4/16/14

Some Thoughts on Richard Blanco

Photo by Jennifer Trivedi

Last night, the President of Roger Williams University, where I am an adjunct, hosted Richard Blanco, the poet now famous for having read at President Obama's Second Inauguration. To Blanco's credit, he seems just as surprised as anyone that he was invited to read at such an event and he seems to have taken this as a mandate to speak for poetry to the American people. He is nearly a rockstar, invited to events everywhere and writing poems for various events and causes. He even showed his own face on a billboard promoting a cause he believes in. Strange to see a poet on a billboard.

Frankly, we, the American poetry community, need it, to an extent. No, I am not with Dana Gioia in that we should get back to poets being super important parts of American life but I do think we need someone who is willing to be the person who travels around showing that poetry in America is very much alive. For the most part, this is where we, in our creative writing programs, etc., run into issues. I think that poetry for most people is not just inaccessible, but something that have no desire to access even if time permitted. That is very unlikely to change, of course. It seems very likely to me that poetry will remain for poets in our society and that it will be hard to grow into the general reading public on our own.

And I am certainly not suggesting that poetry should be accessible for the sake of sales, etc. Poetry should be chaotic thought but I do feel there should be a way into that chaotic thought. I do not think that the poetry community does anything for language/writing or any community by being more available simply to be popular to the general population, which is unlikely to happen regardless. However, that does not mean that poetry should not have a way in and I believe Blanco is a perfectly interesting way into the world of poetry.

He did something last night which surprised me a bit: he did not just read poems, he gave a talk about himself, his experiences and, to an extent, the role that poetry has played in his life and the role he hopes poetry can play in the lives of others. I think this is really important as it seems much of the poetry community has deemed this beneath them- and maybe it is to a certain extent- but simply pointing out the role of poetry in modern society does not seem like something to be shunned and it certainly does not seem like we, as poets, should dismiss the non-poetry-reading-community for not immediately being inclined towards reading poetry without a way in.

I think fiction has a nice balance here. We read narratives from a very young age. Children's literature is all about creating, however simple, a narrative. Poetry is always going to be a step beyond that and we should not feel guilty for that but we should accept that there must be some way into the world of deeper reading that perhaps does not exist outside of the university setting, for better or for worse. And, again, perhaps it is perfectly fine the modern poetry has its space within academia but that does not mean there should be not attempt at all to take the various goals of contemporary writing beyond that public.

The crowd at RWU last night was interesting. It was advertised across the school and through the town of Bristol, RI and the surrounding community. Basically, beyond our own creative writing department, there was still a good crowd of folks who, more than likely, would never have seen a poetry event come along, much less attend such a thing. This is Blanco's power now, to bring people into the world of poets and poetry. From there, people are free to do what they like. As RWU's President said to me after Blanco's talk, now people have to choose what they want to do but having Blanco there gives people that choice. Maybe folks will read more poetry, maybe they'll never read a poem again- who knows, but now that option is there.

Blanco even said as much in his talk. For whatever reason, poetry (and a few other art forms) seem to turn people off very quickly. If you do not get one poem or one thing, it becomes immediately inaccessible and, I would argue, because there is no desire in American society to go further into anything that is not immediately accessible, people avoid it, often by dismissing it with that favorite word, "difficult."

When I spoke with Blanco after, I noted how tired he looked. All this is weighing down on him, I said to him. Not only does all of this keep him busy but he also feels he has a task in an attempting to get poetry back out of the classroom and into the hands of ordinary citizens. I mentioned to him that Jackie Robinson took it upon himself, after his years in baseball, to become an ambassador of sorts for Civil Rights in this country. He felt he was in a unique position to help the movement by speaking his opinion. This is not to say Blanco is in any way like Robinson (which he laughed at when I mentioned the idea) but like Robinson, attempting to be on the forefront of something could be very difficult, long-term, on him personally.

But perhaps the sacrifice is important. Maybe it is something that, because so few are willing to do it, must fall on him. He has been given a unique position among American poets to do something which we cannot, even if it is not something anyone would ask for. I think that while the folks who I consider my own cohort are doing interesting work, there should be someone saying that there is a role for poetry in American society. Maybe that will never happen- maybe it never SHOULD happen, but that does not mean there should not be someone saying it. Richard Blanco, for the moment, seems to be that person.

Maybe he is not the ideal candidate- I have not even discussed his work- but at the present time, he seems to have some kind of hold on the population at large and if poetry is what he is promoting, perhaps we should not be too quick to judge him for how he handles it all. (Honestly, how would any of us handle such a thing?) He has something most poets in this country never will, the ear of the public. Perhaps his opinions and thoughts will not land him on the cover of Time Magazine, but there are people who will give some thought to his comments. Is that not something we as a poetry community can at least be somewhat appreciative for, even if we do not agree 100% with all of it? Surely some will be unable to reconcile these things, but I think having someone who is quite concerned with the role of poetry in society having a place in the public sphere is not a bad thing.

2/7/14

Tragipoetics III

"Prose" v "Poetry"

Berlin, 1945

Tragipoetics I and II

First, I should say that the divide between prose and poetry is not one to be worried over, at least not for this post. In fact, it seems that the hybrid nature of genre pulls out amazing work. I do not want anyone who might be reading this to think that I am attempting to draw some line in the sand between prose and poetry. Indeed, I believe any attempts at drawing a line are superfluous. The lines between genre are blurring further every day, as they ought, and I think we need to think beyond genre in general.

That said, for the sake of this post, I am thinking of prose (fiction/non-fiction/etc.) as a thing versus poetry as a separate thing. Where the line is will likely vary in this post. I assume you have your own line by which you divide things and I assume we can use either definition as we move forward. Again, this is not a series of posts concerned with the divide of genre but rather with how we process trauma and tragedy through art in general.

So, where does prose differ from poetry? We generally think of prose, whether fiction or non-fiction, as some kind of narrative-driven form. There are characters and dialogue and a definite beginning and end which to work from and towards. A poem, of course, does not need to have ANY of these things- a poem can go beyond these stricter definitions and work without them just as easily. Now, some would argue a poem ought to have these things as well but I quite obviously do not feel that way.

No, a poem need not resolve anything. A poem is a space in which a question can be raised, an issue can be brought in, some trauma revealed, without ever having to deal with it directly. As written in earlier posts on this subject, a poem has the option of being the saturated form of experience, focusing more purely on sense than on any of the structured artifacts that prose writing provides. Of course, some of my favorite prose works also ignore all of these rules and regulations, so something to consider.

Poetry, to me, however, is pure language, a distilled version of our developed and evolving construction. It is concerned with how words and meaning work, rather than attempting to create some kind of progression out of them. And because poetry has the option to be concerned with language alone and not with these other factors, I believe poetry has a unique ability to deal with processing experience. This is, again and again, not to say that other forms of art cannot do the same, just that I believe the poetic work is situated in such a way as to allow for it to thrive in this kind of processing.

What do I mean by "pure?" I am not suggesting that poetry is by any means "clean" or "unadulterated" -- far from it. Poetry can delve  into things that I believe may not be able to delve into otherwise. Nothing can stop a poetic work from getting gritty or muddy -- what would be the point? All I mean by pure is that language is generally what it is, the base of other thoughts and images. It is in placing words together that we create. Maybe we can even boil down and say that it is letters which are atomic and words which are molecules, etc. They are the building blocks and bring meaning along with them inherently.

All that said, I believe it is prose which allows for the set up of tragedy. It is in prose where the description of an event can create a therapeutic result. In Robert Coover's "The Babysitter," there are traumatic events wrapped up in the mundane: the girdle, what seems to be the rape of a young woman-- these abnormal things begin with a perfectly normal evening. Coover's language is Charles Bernstein's "chaotic thought" that exists in poetry and there is nothing but chaos in "The Babysitter." Coover here, perhaps better than a lot of poets, captures trauma through language versus narrative, its hybrid nature only adding to the trauma for the reader because there is very little to latch onto here.

Obviously, there is no "therapy" to be had in Coover's work: "The Babysitter" is void of any true resolution, which brings it closer to the realm of experience than narrative for me. However, whereas it is designed as a work of fiction (there is a narrative and characters and dialogue, etc.) we have to look at it as though it is the retelling of a tragedy in the lives of an American family and their employee. This retelling is what prose can do that poetry would find difficult to achieve: it can give us the moments in vivid detail without giving us the experience of these events. We get no sense of how these characters are processing, either during or after, these events. That, I believe, is where a poem can come in.

12/4/13

Why Do We Expect Meaning From Poems?



Contemporary poems and poets that purposely work-around the styles and tones (though not necessarily the influences) of prior generations are not unlike Lynch’s description of films and music. However, in poetry classes, students are either asked to find the meaning of a poem or, in the case of teaching a course with a focus on postmodern poets, seek meaning themselves. Meaning, of course, is endemic to everyone. We are constantly searching through the world, through space and culture for the meaning to life and, less abstractly, to the events which surround us, especially the traumatic events of shootings and other acts of violence.

However, the search for an objective meaning to these existential questions is fruitless. As Camus tells us, there are three methods for dealing with this fruitlessness: physical death (suicide), philosophical death (religion), or acceptance of the absurdity which surrounds the quest for meaning. The fourth option, I wrote previously, is denial, a very popular choice.

We are trained by the education system, at least in the United States, to seek meaning, to codify our response to anything: birthdays, death, politics and music or art. We are expected not only to place a subjective value judgment on these items but also to explain via language why these subjective judgments are correct.

I believe this kind of judgment and search is based on religion. Religion tells us not only what is right and wrong but also that any subjective “truth” is sinful and that only the objectivity of the very subjective faith can lead to an answer to these greater existential questions. Further, it is in determining these judgments that meaning can be discerned. Religion is not philosophical death for nothing.

Students are especially conditioned, then, to find a correct meaning in the poems they read, a process hammered together in grade school in order to teach a consensus literature with a set meaning before being catapulted into the subjective world. Does religion not do the same thing? Does it not attempt to indoctrinate one with a set of ideas for governing oneself and others before unleashing these individuals on the world? This is not to say that education is killing philosophical thought – far from it. Education should be the expansion not only of knowledge but also the blueprint for how one should acquire more knowledge. However, for the sake of testing and making sure those entering the world beyond school have the same base of knowledge, it became necessary at some point to teach that objective meaning is possible.

Life, friends, is not boring – at least not anymore. Life is chaotic and yet simultaneously structured. There seems to be a narrowing definition of success in American society and it seems that any discipline which challenges that definition is deemed “difficult” and undermined through that difficulty via its subjectivity.

Poetry, then, stands in opposition on these fronts. Poetry, like Lynch’s example of music and his own films, is a witness to chaos through the subjective lens of experience. However, because poetry uses language, it is expected to make sense, to provide meaning within its framework. Because language seems to exist within set parameters of definition and grammar usage, it is assumed that words themselves are not subjective. Words, because they have a set definition in dictionaries, are seemingly not open to interpretation. Words are made up of their prescribed meaning based on society consensus. Because language is our most developed construct, when elements of it are used, they are decidedly set in their meaning – otherwise, what would there be to hold on to?

Poetry is the tool of abandonment, the way of letting go of these pre-determined parameters of language. A poem is the place to let go of expectation, to cease our attempts at aligning meaning, language and experience. The elements can exist as themselves: experience can remain just that with no need of affirmation and language can be reset with the space of a work as it needs to be.

For some, surely the search for meaning is itself meaning, a sense of belonging to something greater than themselves. Without the search for meaning, life would veer dangerously into the absurd which, under no circumstances, should be accepted. In a poetic work, however, this absurdity should not only be allowed to flourish but it should be expected and encouraged.

12/3/13

Permutational Aesthetics and David Lynch's Mulholland Drive

Previous posts on permutational aesthetics: Dreams of an Ideal Life; Dwelling, Regret and Permutational Art

Surrealists have been living and dying on Gerard de Nerval's opening to Aurelia: "Our dreams are a second life." It is a concept so central to surrealism that one can hardly contemplate escaping it. What happens when one falls asleep is the essential makeup of any surrealist work and nowhere more than in the films of David Lynch. If Ashbery can be considered the offspring of poetic surrealism (a highly debatable claim) then Lynch is at the epicenter of contemporary surrealism, perhaps even globally.

Basically all of Lynch's screen work has dealt in dreams, even the outlier The Straight Story, which is about a man's journey to see a dying relative. Even in that work, Lynch's strange Americana is depicted and the very plot of the story seems like a dream experiment, riding a tractor for great distances in an attempt to see someone before they pass. However, the work most exemplary of surrealism and permutational aesthetics must be 2001's Mulholland Drive, a strange nightmare that covers over unpleasant activities in the waking life.

In the first part of the film, we meet the doe-eyed Betty, a young actress who is passed over for her shot at stardom due to the underground activities of a mysterious man (played by Michael Anderson, Lynch's Man from Another Place in Twin Peaks) and his representatives (one of whom is Lynch's dreamy composer, Angelo Badalamenti). In the cryptic repetition of the line "This is the girl," the director (played by Justin Theroux) is forced to take on an actress for the role that he does not want. In fact, he looks longingly at Betty when she is in the studio but cannot pick her due to the direct threats he is up against. Everything is falling apart for this fellow.

The other part, of course, is the finding of the amnesiac Rita who accidentally makes her way into the home that Betty has kindly been lent by her aunt. Rita is the survivor of a car accident but cannot remember said accident or much of anything, in fact. Betty takes the ailing Rita in and the two eventually become lovers and things are going magically well for Betty, despite her not getting the role she was destined for and whatever horrible things happen to those around her (the poor director finds his wife in bed with Billy Ray Cyrus, which is horrible for everyone; two men in a diner discuss a nightmare scenario actually going on in the film and one ends up dying!).

Of course, the whole thing is a sham: this is desperate actress Diane's reconstructed dream world wherein she is the innocent and well-meaning young hopeful (which she probably was at some point before being corrupted by the horrid ways of Hollywood) and where Rita is nursed back to health rather than killed off for jilting the madly in love Diane.

After Betty and Rita open the blue box, the film shifts and we see what has really been going on: Diane has her lover killed, not only for leaving her for the director (who for whatever reason is forgiven by the dreaming Diane- remember that he is being threatened by cowboys and Billy Ray Cyrus punches him), but also for being "the girl" that gets the role she not only covets but feels is rightly hers. The man she hires, who is hilariously incompetent in her dreamworld (having to kill a second person because he accidentally fires a gun while attempting to make another hit appear to be a suicide), hands her a blue key which makes its way into her dream reconstruction.

In fact, many elements make their way into her dream: the cowboy, the random woman who is the aunt (which is similar to a scene in Twin Peaks where Donna goes to a home, only to find a different interior with someone different living there with the same name), as well as various objects which are too numerous to mention. Of course, in the dream, everything is idealized but reality has a way of sneaking through. Her real name is given to a waitress from whom the waking Diane stole her dream name. They see a dead bloated body in  what we come to realize is waking Diane's apartment and clearly her body at the end when Diane can no longer live with her actions.

In hiring someone to kill her lover, Diane creates an escape in her dreamworld from the horrors of her waking life. Lynch, of course, wants the viewer to believe that the dream life is real (even though the beginning is so clearly a dream) until he washes it away by sucking Betty out of it but one can never quite escape reality, in dreams or in art, and Lynch plays on this duality throughout the film by breaking down the barriers of Diane's dream for Betty to discover. Dreams may be the second life but the first life has its place among the ephemera of the constructed existence and ultimately this causes Diane to not only awaken but leads her to take her own life.

This is naturally at the heart of permutational art. Arts allows us, in an external form, to recreate idealized versions of past events. In Diane's case, she creates a permutation in her dream to deal with the issues she is naturally dwelling on in her waking life (her lover, her career, etc.). It makes sense that by the time one hires an assassin, one has spent an inordinate amount of time dwelling on the slights and wrong-doings one feels has been done to them like Montresor in "The Cask of Amontillado." Diane, of course, must re-enter reality with the evidence of what she has done when she finds the blue key left by her hired killer on the coffee table. It seems he is much more capable in real life, much to dreaming Diane's consternation. Any hope that Camilla might be alive vanishes and ultimately, Diane cannot live with her actions. The idealized dream life seems to make the situation worse as Diane contemplates the alternate stream of existence that she created.

It seems more and more as if the event of Camilla's death occurs the same night Diane sleeps and dreams this dream. Her dream life attempts to worm its way out of the act of murder that she has set in motion. She hopes that Camilla survives but wakes to find she has not, but not because she does not want her dead but rather because she does not want to be the cause of her death. The guilt ultimately is overwhelming for Diane and while an escape back into the dream construction could have made a perfectly reasonable ending, for Lynch, there is only one way out.

9/5/13

On Henriksen's Post

On his Tumblr, Matt Henriksen writes "The best thing about being a poet these days is we are widely ignored and not taken seriously." This has its upsides and downs, of course, an upside being that, yes, we can generally get away with things that might be seen as controversial if someone the public was aware of did them. Fortunately, there is no way for American poetry to be controversial, except to other poets, but it seems we are fully capable of creating our own drama for drama's sake.

Here in lies the conflict that seems to embody much of what has been happening lately: there is a struggle between what Henriksen calls the "anomalies, outcasts, losers," who "don’t need consultants, the establishment hierarchies, or pyramid schemes" and those who wish to see poetry in America as a bourgeoisie engagement, made up of public intellectuals, professionals and politicians who are asked about their opinions on television, who make policy and who are mobbed like Alfred, Lord Tennyson when they are seen on the street.

It seems, to me at least, that poetry isn't (or at least it shouldn't be) about that. Poetry is an act of subversion: it is against the normalcy of language, the complacency of society. It's not about being a pop cultural icon or about being categorized and stuffed into some simple ideological space. Poets, and artists in general, ought to be on the outside of society because that is the way in which one can look into it. Those that want to make poetry a water cooler conversation piece seem to have little understanding of its history.

Robert Archambeau's wonderful essay "The Discursive Situation of Poetry," which is included in his equally wonderful book The Poet Resigns, talks about this history. I admit freely that I didn't know most of it myself. In it, Archambeau takes on those (Dana Goia comes to mind immediately) who wish to make poetry some great endeavor and poets the grandes dames of some kind of intellectual society built on a shining hill of egos.

This, again, doesn't seem to me to be what art is about. Art is an afterthought, the remnants of the ideas and culture that have gone before it. Art is about what's left over when things have passed, the memory and the experience. The thing is, the reason artists are famous after they are dead, to use a very tired cliché, is because artists always make up the awareness of a time period, which isn't something that happens overnight, although we seem to be trying to in the poetry world-- we cannot create our legacy by will alone.

Henriksen points out a systemic problem with art, especially in this country and to a similar extent, in academia, which is the commodification of art, the branding of it in order to make it a non-difficult, accessible item available for purchase for the purpose of profit. Especially in colleges and universities, where students are now taking on a lifetime of debt in order to get very little by way of future prospects, the arts are falling into a worm hole in which the outcomes are not definable or identifiable in any simple or timely way but must be in order to justify their existence.

This, to me, is a constant issue within the Capitalistic society: things must have a monetary value and not an abstract value before they are allowed to exist in the same world as the norm. And the beauty of it is that there are those within poetry, who in order to justify their existence as poets, are attempting to pull poetry into the branded, hyper-capital. On occasion it feels like our own establishment within the poetry world is busier trying to get into regular establishment, like the pigs of Animal Farm, than exist in the system which is already in place for them.

It's hard to blame folks, really. We all want to be comfortable and be taken seriously, especially the people that consider themselves adults. When you have your own slice of the "American dream," paying a mortgage and driving a large car, the answer to "What do you do?" rarely ends with "I write poems." Some might say that it would be nice if poets were paid like athletes but that hypothetical society would be the one in which poetry, as a mainstream established art form would be usurped by some other form which takes as its motivation the subversion of societal hierarchies.

This, however, in Henriksen's words, does not mean those people should expect the "embrace" of the "loser poets." No, it's a battle that will constantly go on because "American Poetry," as an institution. is growing, and in seemingly close numbers on both sides of the commercial/ars gratia artis divide. The embrace of either side would mean poetry has lost whatever vigor it had and that seems worse than the in-fighting and commoditization of it in the first place.

The only place I take issue with Henriksen is on whether his Tumblr/Facebook post is a "manifesto." Regardless of his saying it isn't, it is, mainly because it (the piece) gives us the intentions of a group, their motives and their views. It tells us what loser poets are not: bankers and politicians, who seem people and their productions as fetishized objects rather than the art and artists they are. Henriksen's manifesto creates a public of poets as defined separately from other poets. Henriksen points to an already existing line and shows us what side we were already on, whether we believe necessarily in the tenants of either side.

The Most Important List of Poets Ever

Matt Henriksen is a half-blind/half-cyborg poet who drinks soda in a top hat 'cause he thinks he's better than everyone else.

I don't know about all the other lists of poets that have come out lately. They grade poets on their contribution to poetry, not, say, their ability to sit in a car, converse politely and avoid the feeling of death that accompanies most interactions with Matt Henriksen.

In May of 2011, Matt Henriksen visited Providence RI to read at Kate Schapira and Brent Legault's Publically Complex Reading Series (at Ada Books). My wife, Jennifer, had just returned from a year in the field doing research for her dissertation. She had had the car. I drove only a few times during the year and thus, when Matt turned up, was re-acclimating myself to driving the literally rough streets of Providence. Since, Mr. Henriksen (fuck him) has made fun of my driving on at least two separate occasions. THIS AGGRESSION WILL NOT STAND, MAN. 

I'm very serious about my driving. I learned from my brother, who is overly aggressive, and my father, who is the least aggressive person ever, at least on the road. In me, this has created a perfect balance of awesomeness. I may be bald, overweight, an above average poet, salsa dancer, professor and extremely above average hamburger maker, but degrading any of the items on that list wouldn't bother me. Make fun of my driving, however, and you'll find yourself ostracized, probably from all of humanity.

I can only imagine Mr. Henriksen drives like he picks baseball teams. Here now is an INCOMPLETE list (in order of remembrance) of poets who find me a perfectly fine driver (if I've forgotten you, please email me or leave a comment! WE MUST FIGHT THE SCOURGE THAT IS MATT HENRIKSEN):

1) Jessica Smith
2) Jerome Rothenberg
3) Johannes Goransson
4) Karen Lepri
5) Catherine Imbriglio
6) Gale Nelson
7) Darren Angle
8) Kate Schapira
9) Jordan Stempleman
10) Andrew Bourne
11) Claire Donato
12) Tony Tost
13) Mark Nowak

If I have forgotten that I gave you a ride, DON'T BLAME ME. BLAME MATT HENRIKSEN because I'm so angry right now that I CAN'T EVEN TYPE A LIST OF POETS WITHOUT FORGETTING SOME OF THEM TO WHOM I HAVE GIVEN RIDES ETC. Look at all the caps!

(seriously: if I've forgotten you, please let me know. If you disagree with your inclusion on this list, tell it to Castro.)

7/6/13

Brief Written Response to Lacoue-Labarthe's Poetry As Experience

[This was written for the Theories of the Lyric class I took at Brown under the wonderful and brilliant Susan Bernstein. The class, mostly, was well above me and I'm not sure I did the course any service by being there. That said, I'm posting this because it was a response I gave in the course to Phillippe Lacoue-Labarthe's Poetry As Experience, which we read. It was a work I really latched on to, which may be evident if you've been reading this blog at all. I'm also sharing this because it has nowhere to go, may be totally wrong but is still interesting to me and something I'd like to explore further. As President Obama says, this is "above my pay-grade" but hopefully won't be forever. The crossed-out passages were left because, well, no one is grading me here.]

Phillippe Lacoue-Labarthe begins with a reading of two poems by Celan, starting off by telling us about some of the translation and publication history. Immediately he suggests that while the titles of both poems are towns, most likely commemorating visits, they really stand in for Hölderlin (Tubingen) and Heidegger (Todtnauberg, where Heidegger famously worked). As the two poems are linked by theme and the word heute, so are Hölderlin and Heidegger, though the connection between those two is thoroughly through Heidegger. On page 18, Lacoue-Labarthe discusses experience as something that differs from living because rather than simply describing events, poetry tasks itself with working in memory and the sensations of a moment. “A visit in memory of that experience,” Lacoue-Labarthe writes, which is also in the non-form of pure non-event.” In the last paragraph on page 20, Lacoue-Labarthe states that there basically is no “poetic experience” because calling something an experience necessarily deviates from something that has been lived. This I believe is the crux of both halves of the book: how do we experience the events that give the sections their titles and how does poetry aide us in that experience, vs the recounting of events? On page 14, Lacoue-Labarthe asks “What is the work of poetry that, forswearing the repetition of disastrous, deadly, already –said, makes itself absolutely singular? What should we think of poetry (or what of thought is left in poetry) that must refuse, sometimes with great stubbornness, to signify?” I think this leads to a discussion that is still going on in poetry, which is one of difficulty and levels of “coding.” At what point does poetry go too far and become so difficult and so abstract that it allows no real reading? It’s a complaint I’ve heard all too often, so many apologies for harping on this one point.

Before I begin to discuss the second three-quarters of the book, I believe it is impossible to know what’s going on without knowing about Celan’s interaction with Heidegger. Apparently, Heidegger was a fan of Celan’s and though Celan was naturally skeptical of Heidegger due to his affiliation with National Socialism, met with Heidegger in Totenburg, Heidegger’s retreat in the Black Forrest. There is the suggestion in the poem (and of course in Lacoue-Labarthe) that the meeting and their mutual respect for each other’s work (Celan’s being influenced by Heidegger and vice versa) had the potential to create a milestone in their relationship. The poem is not, however, the recounting of these events, but is the experience of them.

The section titles of “Remembering the Dates” ask us to define the words for ourselves before showing us how poetry helps us with these issues. We begin at “Catastrophe,” of course, which goes beyond trauma and signals an ending of some kind, usually one involving tragedy. (Page 67) For Lacoue-Labarthe, it is the poetic act which is “catastrophic” because poetry questions that which are, in a sense, expected or understood. To phrase it more simply, poetry can be and often is, a tool for dismantling the information we thought we had. Specific to Celan, on page 68 no, Lacoue-Labarthe says that he believes poetry is the “interruption of the ‘poetic’”, the intertitles to a silent film, as it were. Poetry, on page 51, pushes existence to be “released at the height of catastrophe,” (to page 55) an act of which “allows the human to take ‘place’ within” Perhaps this is all to say that while we are free to act as our true selves in the midst of a catastrophic event, so too is poetry there to explore the experience, not merely as a list, but as a set of sensations.

In thinking of the word “Prayer,” the first thing that comes to my mind is a request- but something beyond that. A prayer is meant to ask some divine being whether or not they will intercede into the events of humans and fix them in the manner the person praying prescribes. The poem that Lacoue-Labarthe talks about here beginning at page 71 is something more of a “negative prayer” because it does not invoke a being and in fact is to “no one” at all. There is the absence of an addressee, which is indeed the opposite of a prayer in the common sense. One rarely invokes no ‘thing’ at all to beg of it that which human intervention cannot seemingly provide. This falls into a discussion by Lacoue-Labarthe about the word God, especially in that it is not a name, though it is to stand in for one. The paragraph discussing Hölderlin’s “’withdrawal’ of the divine” is interesting in that it wants to give an example of an experience with which any experience seems impossible or that we would perhaps be skeptical of. By removing oneself from the direct contact of a divine being- by “retreating”- is where experience seems to begin. The conclusion that Lacoue-Labarthe eventually comes to is that a poem that seems so prayer-like because it hopes to evoke the sensations and experiences of praying without having to invoke the elements necessary to call it a “prayer”: “The poem arrives in the prayer’s stead,” Lacoue-Labarthe writes on 86, and “the poem is…uttered by the ‘deposed’ or ‘fallen’.” The poem is “unburdened” where the prayer only brings burden along.

In “Sublime” it seems that Lacoue-Labarthe really accepts the idea that poetry is what gives us a place free of fear. And though it is art and wants to unsettle us, harkening back to a previous essay’s use of unheimliche, art “suspends” and “produces” pleasure. It seems that Celan, according to Lacoue-Labarthe is somehow against this sentiment: Celan perhaps does not feel that art should create a delusion but it rather it is the job of art to show up that which is unsuspended and reflective. However, this may have less to do with the true nature of art broadly and more of Celan’s experiences. However, it seems that Lacoue-Labarthe tends to agree with Celan further along: modern art is an art in which nothing can go wrong (because it is sublime), perhaps because it is already anti-beauty and it “shows the pain of presentation” before questioning the nature of presentation as standard.

Upon first seeing “hagiography,” I would imagine that most of us would know the older meaning, which basically the biography of a holy person. Here, Lacoue-Labarthe equates “Todtnauberg” with hagiography, perhaps because he believe Celan nearly turned Heidegger and his visit to him into a religious pilgrimage, a word used by Gadamer on page 92. I must admit I am confused a bit as to how Lacoue-Labarthe sees it this way when Celan is describe as being in despair after the meeting, perhaps because he had expected some kind of apology. However, if “Todtnauberg” is to be a reverential piece, is it the experience of it rather than the direct effect that gives it its hagiographic qualities?

It is in the act of self- and other identification that human beings express their sense of existence; therefore, as to reword Lacoue-Labarthe, language is existence. The only way to summarize such a short piece is to quote what is most relevant to us directly: “When poetry accomplishes its task, which is to push itself to the origin of language…it encounters…the naked possibilities of address, reminding us of the address issues in “Prayer.”

On page 98, the “Pain” section, Lacoue-Labarthe gives us Heidegger’s definition of experience as something obtained “along the way” but pain of course is then that which “tears asunder…yet draws everything to itself.” Pain is something we’re all familiar with, but in poetry, pain is something that divides, conquers, and reassembles. Lacoue-Labarthe equates pain with lyricism, which is an interesting definition of something which speaks to the self. Is the self pained and is it something that creates an identity in being objectified? At the end he talks about blindness and lucidity- a clear-headedness that comes from a lack of sight, I suppose. On page 101, I’m fascinated by where Lacoue-Labarthe talks about sight being associated with movement because of course, it is the movement and reflection of light which gives those of us who can see vision.

In “Ecstacy,” which is of course very short, Rousseau’s excitement as his “rebirth” seems to be an experience within the realm of poetry, most likely alone. While Rousseau can tell us what happened, only poetry can give us the sensation of so nearly missing death.

Vertigo, which is the experience of motion while completely stationary, is contrasted with Celan’s statement in “The Meridian,” translated several times over (I wonder if we can have one more from the room, even). Poetry, in my best judgment, is the experience of speaking into an infinite space while become mortal and ultimately in a void.

Blindness is love. I think that experience is probably clear to most of us and is so far the clearest equation with poetry.

“Lied” is the act of betrayal in a sense, because absence is really missing something that should be there, so in the case of the relationship between Heidegger and Celan, because the apology is missing, what is left is the lie.

“Sky” comes back to “God,” but at a new angle. I am reminded of the question of karma in the Bhagavad Gita, where Krishna ultimately explains to Arjun that the question of karma is not up to him, so there is no point in dwelling on it. In another sense, quoting Dylan, “All you can do is do what you must.” Really we are back into discussions of measurement and for Hölderlin kindness is an example of “divine goodness” Near his conclusion, referring back to “Lied,” Lacoue-Labarthe states that for Hölderlin, God is not really “absent” and that his kindnesses (such as death) are examples of his interaction with humans.

I feel that “The Unforgivable” gives us yet another sense of betrayal: why is someone whose work informs Celan’s so well in such opposition to him personally? Obviously this is such a huge question for Celan (like writing in a language which has just promoted the extermination of his people, for example) that really what comes through as betrayal is that Heidegger never recants his statements, never questions his own judgment. For Celan, this act seems to signify something so dark in humanity: “thought will never recover from such silence.”